Middle school application essay sample

Included below is a sample essay. It's well-written and avoids the common admission essay pitfalls discussed in previous videos (listing off accomplishments like a resume, writing about someone else instead of making it personal, etc.), so it's not simple to know how an admissions officer will react.

To give your child the best chance of success, it's important to be intentional and thoughtful about your child’s application. Remember that admission committees are interested in learning about your child and what your family can offer, and how you will contribute to their schools and school communities.

Sample essay 2 with admissions feedback 1 Introduction. We've discussed in a general sense what makes a good essay, but it's always helpful to look at specific... 2 Sample essay 2. We are looking for an essay that will help us know you better as a person and as a student. Please write... 3 Feedback from admissions. More ...

Rather than painting a complete picture of their student, parent and student essays often read like a student activity form. To give your child the best chance of success, it's important to be intentional and thoughtful about your child’s application.